the fractured frame
your reflections is
in pieces, same.
though shards are sharp, and
their cuts cause pain
you collect them still
and start again.
their cuts cause pain
you collect them still
and start again.
mirror, oh mirror
i hope and pray
with time and patience
you'll heal one day.
you will heal one day.
i hope and pray
with time and patience
you'll heal one day.
you will heal one day.
8 comments:
fabulous, jamie, fabulous! :)
Ang galing mo palang humabi ng tula!
I love your poem! Ang galing!
thanks guys :)
I fourth the motion. Hehehe =)
I like the form and how it reflects being broken but the rhyme adds a sugar coating effect.
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Puwede ring, "You will heel one day."
Ahehehehe.
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