Sunday, January 11, 2009

broken

the fragmented glass
the fractured frame
your reflections is
in pieces, same.

though shards are sharp, and
their cuts cause pain
you collect them still
and start again.

mirror, oh mirror
i hope and pray
with time and patience
you'll heal one day.

you will heal one day.


8 comments:

pie said...

fabulous, jamie, fabulous! :)

Richard the Lionheart said...

Ang galing mo palang humabi ng tula!

Mugen said...

I love your poem! Ang galing!

jamie da vinci! said...

thanks guys :)

Mr. Scheez said...

I fourth the motion. Hehehe =)

Niel Camhalla said...

I like the form and how it reflects being broken but the rhyme adds a sugar coating effect.

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joelmcvie said...

Puwede ring, "You will heel one day."

Ahehehehe.